"O Father! O Sun! O Satan!" these lines haunted two teenager as they face the nightmare of their nightmares hoped that prevails in them to stop themselves be a sarifice to Satan? Does good really wins over the evil? Or is it just a myth?
"O Father! O Sun! O Satan!" these lines haunted two teenager as they face the nightmare of their nightmares hoped that prevails in them to stop themselves be a sarifice to Satan? Does good really wins over the evil? Or is it just a myth?
“Coming down the pike they started to joke on each other, discussed their life and also went to commemorate the time they had together while partaking giggles.”
“Coming down the pike, they shared jokes with each other and discussed their lives,commemorating the time they were spending together.”
“Therefore, as far as to acknowledge it, I would like to acknowledge my friend, Syed Soban Khalid who took time out of his non-busy life and gave my novelette its first read and hence suggested and edited it.”
Flow and smooth transitions; that I liked in your writing!